The sea rises
angrier tonight.
An unquenchable
dark thirst
crests the waves
with jagged knives.
Denizens
of the deep
assault the coasts,
the derricks,
and the boats
with focused wrath,
staining blades
with crimson gurgles.
The black gold
of mankind's greed
bled upon salted waters
one final time.
This night,
the lifeless, cold surfaces
upon which
the bipeds arrogantly
stand,
avidly sip from the red swill
bubbling and spilling
down their once
dry necks.
The filth of the land
will stop
darkening the waters
now that the ocean
is no longer calm.
The only sound
the seashells now harbor
is the cry for war.
Mr. X will arrive soon
without a doubt.
I never met him,
yet I must oppose him.
Mr. X is nothing like me,
he's a whole different letter.
Mr. X is here for Y,
just like me,
but Y doesn't know it.
Mr. X got Y impressed,
and I hide in shadows.
Y tells me about him,
his looks, his clothes,
his voice, his jokes,
his gentle, strong hands
Mr. X is hated.
Days go by,
days that are numbered,
and I wish it were his days.
Dates go by,
dates that are counted,
and I wish it were my dates.
Mr. X is lucky,
and he doesn't know it.
Y is happier,
cheerful, chipper,
and I suspect
Mr. X's involvement.
I want to be Mr. X,
but I
The sun is too far.
The warmth is barely felt
up here,
where the roaring winds
abduct kindness
as Zeus himself
was bound to do
when beauty was
witnessed,
that light waiting
to be ravished.
My struggle is in vain.
There's no pride in my sweat,
no redemption, no prize,
just the wasting of feathers
and the pungent smell
of skin charring
with the black fire
of self-destruction.
I knew my ascension
was to be my downfall,
but I wanted a last look
at the heavens above,
and to get as close as possible
to the home of the gods,
so they could hear me
-very clearly-
cursing them,
before I plunged
into hell's maw.
Accosted,
confronted,
I brought my shield up,
ready for the attacks.
My sword had drawn blood.
It was my just punishment.
Now, bare-handed,
I see the familiar,
gleaming steel
slashing unabashedly
in your accusing hands.
Can you not notice
how the blood splatters
tainting your white robes?
"A wish,
anything,
just ask me."
The angel
said,
looking at me
patiently.
I hesitated
and pondered
for a while.
"A wish "
I muttered.
"Yes, only one."
Replied
the holy
creature.
Few minutes
passed
while I
came up
with the
perfect
answer.
"I wish,
to never
have
to wish for
anything
ever again."
The angel
smiled
and
immediately
after
I heard
"Granted."
A flash of
light
followed,
and as I
was just
recovering
from the
experience,
I met
you.
Well I have to go.
I'll leave my shadow,
cold and dark,
but still something of mine.
An obscure memento,
hugging the floor
or the wall,
running away from the sun,
hiding behind me.
I'll leave it to you.
I have no use for it
and you might have.
It's my vague image,
the hollow dreams
of a vacant mind.
I'll leave it to you,
but just know this,
when I'll come back
to retrieve it,
you won't need it anymore.
I'm asking you,
because I am unable
to do it,
because
it is chaos
if I use my own hands,
but if you break them for me,
it would be
just salvation.
I ask you this favor,
because it will be the last one
for this old shell of a person,
which I will discard only
if you help me create
my own destruction,
my own death and rebirth.
I love you dearly
but I can't express it
as long as I drown
and struggle
in the solitude
of my glass cocoon,
surrounded by
colorful mirrors,
full of wrong reflections.
Find me by killing me.
Reveal my true self
by skinning me alive,
because I deserve it,
because it's the only way,
and I'll
This is my place,
my asylum of peace,
this damp bend
of metallic walls
with a dead-end.
This is my refuge,
despite no light.
This is my home,
although humble.
This is my paradise
because it is private,
because it is mine,
because no matter
where I go,
whom I meet,
or what I do,
at the end of the day,
there's no place in
the whole world
this mere,
simple piece
of the sewer system
could not match
in elegance
and comfort.
Rodent or not,
you would feel the same
if you could only have
that little corner
in the safety of darkness,
with the soothing sounds
of water running
in the background,
allowing you rest
of bo
The clarity,
the simplicity of things,
they all come with age.
I have not reached that
for my third eye has not opened,
even though
my other two are tired
of seeing
the same things that plague
my endless routine.
Your hand on my shoulder
guides me
through perfidious nebulas
of friends and relatives,
but there comes a time
when you just push me forward,
because you know better,
because you've been there,
and in your zealousness
to drive me towards
the purest air,
you fail to notice
that I have stopped breathing.
Don't get me wrong,
I love you
and your benevolent intentions,
but I'd rather
stumble and pick myself up,
There he goes, unaware
of the cloud above his head,
like a kite, it hovers,
it counts his every step.
When he laughs, it mocks him
with a grin, so dark and wet,
he can't help if his joy
is constantly under threat.
There he goes, all alone,
hitting every rock and branch
on a path, that he heard
was so easy, fun and fast.
He's tired, cut and bruised,
his ego trails behind.
The sun cannot go through
a canopy so unkind.
There he goes, hopeless now,
cursing, screaming, at the edge
of the world; ruthless, cold,
feet slipping off the ledge.
An arm is raised, fingers wide,
throat is dry, eyes are glazed.
With no answer, they bot
The sea rises
angrier tonight.
An unquenchable
dark thirst
crests the waves
with jagged knives.
Denizens
of the deep
assault the coasts,
the derricks,
and the boats
with focused wrath,
staining blades
with crimson gurgles.
The black gold
of mankind's greed
bled upon salted waters
one final time.
This night,
the lifeless, cold surfaces
upon which
the bipeds arrogantly
stand,
avidly sip from the red swill
bubbling and spilling
down their once
dry necks.
The filth of the land
will stop
darkening the waters
now that the ocean
is no longer calm.
The only sound
the seashells now harbor
is the cry for war.
Mr. X will arrive soon
without a doubt.
I never met him,
yet I must oppose him.
Mr. X is nothing like me,
he's a whole different letter.
Mr. X is here for Y,
just like me,
but Y doesn't know it.
Mr. X got Y impressed,
and I hide in shadows.
Y tells me about him,
his looks, his clothes,
his voice, his jokes,
his gentle, strong hands
Mr. X is hated.
Days go by,
days that are numbered,
and I wish it were his days.
Dates go by,
dates that are counted,
and I wish it were my dates.
Mr. X is lucky,
and he doesn't know it.
Y is happier,
cheerful, chipper,
and I suspect
Mr. X's involvement.
I want to be Mr. X,
but I
The sun is too far.
The warmth is barely felt
up here,
where the roaring winds
abduct kindness
as Zeus himself
was bound to do
when beauty was
witnessed,
that light waiting
to be ravished.
My struggle is in vain.
There's no pride in my sweat,
no redemption, no prize,
just the wasting of feathers
and the pungent smell
of skin charring
with the black fire
of self-destruction.
I knew my ascension
was to be my downfall,
but I wanted a last look
at the heavens above,
and to get as close as possible
to the home of the gods,
so they could hear me
-very clearly-
cursing them,
before I plunged
into hell's maw.
Accosted,
confronted,
I brought my shield up,
ready for the attacks.
My sword had drawn blood.
It was my just punishment.
Now, bare-handed,
I see the familiar,
gleaming steel
slashing unabashedly
in your accusing hands.
Can you not notice
how the blood splatters
tainting your white robes?
"A wish,
anything,
just ask me."
The angel
said,
looking at me
patiently.
I hesitated
and pondered
for a while.
"A wish "
I muttered.
"Yes, only one."
Replied
the holy
creature.
Few minutes
passed
while I
came up
with the
perfect
answer.
"I wish,
to never
have
to wish for
anything
ever again."
The angel
smiled
and
immediately
after
I heard
"Granted."
A flash of
light
followed,
and as I
was just
recovering
from the
experience,
I met
you.
Well I have to go.
I'll leave my shadow,
cold and dark,
but still something of mine.
An obscure memento,
hugging the floor
or the wall,
running away from the sun,
hiding behind me.
I'll leave it to you.
I have no use for it
and you might have.
It's my vague image,
the hollow dreams
of a vacant mind.
I'll leave it to you,
but just know this,
when I'll come back
to retrieve it,
you won't need it anymore.
I'm asking you,
because I am unable
to do it,
because
it is chaos
if I use my own hands,
but if you break them for me,
it would be
just salvation.
I ask you this favor,
because it will be the last one
for this old shell of a person,
which I will discard only
if you help me create
my own destruction,
my own death and rebirth.
I love you dearly
but I can't express it
as long as I drown
and struggle
in the solitude
of my glass cocoon,
surrounded by
colorful mirrors,
full of wrong reflections.
Find me by killing me.
Reveal my true self
by skinning me alive,
because I deserve it,
because it's the only way,
and I'll
This is my place,
my asylum of peace,
this damp bend
of metallic walls
with a dead-end.
This is my refuge,
despite no light.
This is my home,
although humble.
This is my paradise
because it is private,
because it is mine,
because no matter
where I go,
whom I meet,
or what I do,
at the end of the day,
there's no place in
the whole world
this mere,
simple piece
of the sewer system
could not match
in elegance
and comfort.
Rodent or not,
you would feel the same
if you could only have
that little corner
in the safety of darkness,
with the soothing sounds
of water running
in the background,
allowing you rest
of bo
The clarity,
the simplicity of things,
they all come with age.
I have not reached that
for my third eye has not opened,
even though
my other two are tired
of seeing
the same things that plague
my endless routine.
Your hand on my shoulder
guides me
through perfidious nebulas
of friends and relatives,
but there comes a time
when you just push me forward,
because you know better,
because you've been there,
and in your zealousness
to drive me towards
the purest air,
you fail to notice
that I have stopped breathing.
Don't get me wrong,
I love you
and your benevolent intentions,
but I'd rather
stumble and pick myself up,
There he goes, unaware
of the cloud above his head,
like a kite, it hovers,
it counts his every step.
When he laughs, it mocks him
with a grin, so dark and wet,
he can't help if his joy
is constantly under threat.
There he goes, all alone,
hitting every rock and branch
on a path, that he heard
was so easy, fun and fast.
He's tired, cut and bruised,
his ego trails behind.
The sun cannot go through
a canopy so unkind.
There he goes, hopeless now,
cursing, screaming, at the edge
of the world; ruthless, cold,
feet slipping off the ledge.
An arm is raised, fingers wide,
throat is dry, eyes are glazed.
With no answer, they bot
Current Residence: Orlando, FL deviantWEAR sizing preference: XL Favourite genre of music: Pop, soft rock, dance...but I listen to everything Favourite cartoon character: Piccolo, Jiraiya, Kenpachi, Duo, Sanosuke Personal Quote: As a philosopher, I have a question for every solution
Favourite Visual Artist
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Favourite Movies
Braveheart, Princess Mononoke, The Matrix 1, The Prestige, etc.
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
It constantly shuffles
Favourite Writers
No specific one...I read several
Favourite Games
Ocarina of Time, Soul Calibur series, God of War series, Prince of Persia (XBOX), Final Fantasy VI-X
All my poems that I cared to share are now up and running...I left out some that were pretty bad so you're not missing much...enjoy and please comment...it helps me (and my ego)...haha...
...so might as well air them out...I'll add them little by little, cuz me lazy....nowadays, I don't even write, maybe because I'm in a pretty good mood...anger and sadness are more conducive to poetry than happiness...but...the return to form is imminent...it itches, my precious...
I had not written a poem in quite a while so I decided to make one during breaks at work and found myself unable to...guess I was too distracted by needy customers :grin:... so I used a deviation and a random word generator to rattle the muse and see what I would come up with...and after the evil act was done then i became a deviant myself, I guess missing those proud times eons ago when I was a member of Elfwood. Alright...I cast the first stone in the river and I calmly await for the ripples...